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Deep loving yet, heartful piece, you say God sad at you all weakness, deep
posted by
Mystereo
on January 4, 2009 at 5:06 PM
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Very Nice. ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 28, 2008 at 1:45 AM
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I agree with Troosha my dear
that truly is a striking line; although He loves us no less for what he sees; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on November 27, 2008 at 3:18 AM
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Beautiful...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on November 26, 2008 at 10:57 PM
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Excellent and thoughtful writing. Bravo
posted by
merkie
on November 26, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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life is overwhelming
posted by
Lanetay
on November 26, 2008 at 6:04 PM
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Ruby
“ I blush at the vision we hold up to God”- superb line! We so often fail or fall short and perhaps God isn’t sad about our shortcomings. Perhaps he/she/it is just waiting for us to listen more closely. 
posted by
Troosha
on November 26, 2008 at 9:13 AM
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Very , very good
I believe there is no truth, only perspectives. Brilliantly expressed and very insightful
posted by
lionreign
on November 26, 2008 at 9:01 AM
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This is stunningly insightful!
posted by
EX_TURPI
on November 26, 2008 at 8:37 AM
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So very true..Excellently expressed, Thank you for sharing
posted by
Katray2
on November 26, 2008 at 6:47 AM
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