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Excellent conclusion! I loved the descriptive work leading up to the end too! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 28, 2008 at 12:55 PM
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This is simple and kinda straight from the heart!
posted by
Straightforward
on November 27, 2008 at 11:06 PM
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Powerful...
...and beautifully done.
posted by
Retail_Realist
on November 26, 2008 at 9:23 PM
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This actually brought a tear to my eye...
When I think of all the things that "could have" prevented my son from getting here to me I am without breath or words. Children, no matter the disposition, are a true miracle...but you already knew that.
posted by
Fledgeling_Phoenix
on November 26, 2008 at 4:55 PM
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Aah your life reads like what we call a situation comedy or family drama. I love your happy ending. And what we call resolution love!
posted by
BC-A
on November 26, 2008 at 7:20 AM
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As a single father....
....I can definitely relate! You have the proper perspective and it's obvious that you are, and will, continue to do right by your children.
posted by
metalrat
on November 26, 2008 at 6:43 AM
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Wow!. I can so relate to this. I need to go hug mine right now ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on November 26, 2008 at 6:34 AM
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Absolutely Fabulous
posted by
skye08
on November 26, 2008 at 6:04 AM
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Very beautiful !! cherish every moment, they grow up in a wink of an eye.
Happy Thanksgiving !
posted by
hazel_st_cricket
on November 26, 2008 at 5:51 AM
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