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Wow again touched from your insight you see with you third eye. Mind's eye.
If we open up our mind's eyes then we will see why division do drive bys. Touched!

posted by Mystereo on November 28, 2008 at 9:52 AM | link to this | reply

I need someone to teach me how to write over the picture, but this one is a wee bit hard to see, but glad to see you here

posted by Lanetay on November 25, 2008 at 7:16 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful work...I can feel the emotion and the images that you painted were very intense...I hope all is well with you! Take care my friend..

posted by Wigopa_ on November 25, 2008 at 6:20 PM | link to this | reply

I had to return to reread this.  very good description.
Different but powerful.

posted by Samantha39 on November 25, 2008 at 12:38 PM | link to this | reply

Thoughtful and thought provoking. Challenging and revealing.

posted by EX_TURPI on November 25, 2008 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply

Powerfully profound ...

posted by afzal50 on November 25, 2008 at 6:03 AM | link to this | reply

Quite  a disturbing poem Jen... really scary and sureal... a departure from your usual but still very good , I liked the view from the side of the almost dead... the images were tetric but fantastic,  a new venue for you but still very very good.  xoxo  Take care.

posted by Sinome on November 24, 2008 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply