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sam444

Excellent!

posted by jacenta on November 25, 2008 at 5:27 PM | link to this | reply

Superb Sam! Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 25, 2008 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply

Pulls on the hearstrings...well done!

posted by Ariala on November 25, 2008 at 5:52 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful poem indeed ...

posted by afzal50 on November 25, 2008 at 5:47 AM | link to this | reply

Outstanding, my friend....

posted by _teddypoet_ on November 24, 2008 at 11:46 PM | link to this | reply

there is a yearning and a plea and yet so much dignity- your pursuit is anything but trivial.

posted by bythewindowsill on November 24, 2008 at 11:31 PM | link to this | reply

Fantastic poem

 I love it. 

posted by Kolekshuns on November 24, 2008 at 11:22 PM | link to this | reply

Nice.... I think this is One of my favorites.

posted by yellowrose55 on November 24, 2008 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

nice romantic plea

posted by lustorlove on November 24, 2008 at 6:40 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful!

"The game of life is but trivial pursuit without you".  I love this!  What a beautiful poem!

posted by RASSE on November 24, 2008 at 6:13 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Samantha39 on November 24, 2008 at 5:33 PM | link to this | reply

I WALKED WITH YOU AS YOU WALKED THROUGH THIS, THE GOOD THING ABOUT MEMORIES IS YOU CAN DOWN THAT LANE WHENEVER YOU WANT, THANKS , KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on November 24, 2008 at 4:12 PM | link to this | reply

Such a nice poem; so many images come to mind, happy ones, sad ones, hope and fear... A beauty!

posted by auslander on November 24, 2008 at 3:06 PM | link to this | reply

Sad...

and wonderful. Sometimes it actually makes us feel more alive when we hurt and long for someone THIS much.

posted by Fledgeling_Phoenix on November 24, 2008 at 2:25 PM | link to this | reply

Yearning set in beauty Shelly - stirs the emotions.Bravo

posted by merkie on November 24, 2008 at 2:20 PM | link to this | reply

How beautiful this is Sam.  I think this is a most universal feel for those who have lost a love.  You expressed it in such a lovely way.

posted by TAPS. on November 24, 2008 at 1:03 PM | link to this | reply

Very good, Sam

I think many can relate.

posted by SpitFire70 on November 24, 2008 at 12:55 PM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written

The thoughts of my heart daily, so wonderfully put into words. skye

posted by skye08 on November 24, 2008 at 12:33 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly

Very sweet! I don't know who could possibly resist...

posted by Nautikos on November 24, 2008 at 11:07 AM | link to this | reply

This is incredibly beautiful and filled with passion... Sweetie you nailed it... the feeling of wanting...the sadness... its just lovely and touching.  Superb work!

 

posted by Sinome on November 24, 2008 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

 it should be carved in stone

posted by RITE2SPIN on November 24, 2008 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

I love the natural cadence. The poem flows like a river. Beautiful and worth preserving.

posted by hardilaziz on November 24, 2008 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful tragedy

this is a wonderful piece to inspire melancholy for a minute.  Bravo!!!

Glad to see you are back and not being attacked by headaches !

posted by lionreign on November 24, 2008 at 8:28 AM | link to this | reply

so good!!!

posted by RomaKay on November 24, 2008 at 8:24 AM | link to this | reply

Oh, wow, Dear Sam..so haunting and intense..

Most excellent effect, my Friend!...  

posted by PoetRaye on November 24, 2008 at 8:19 AM | link to this | reply

i always open your poems with the excitement of a child, to see what words leap about and how they affect me. your gift is amazing, a lovely poem. i wonder at times how we yearn for a lost love if they do too? thank you for the read and your words.

posted by rubypoem on November 24, 2008 at 6:43 AM | link to this | reply

Dear Shelly

I am doing well!! I am working on my music right now, I am learning:

  ,   ,   and  !!!

lol!!! I just finished the book 'Twilight'!! It is my favorite book ever written!!!!

She is just an amazing author!!!!

Love ANROHA25

posted by ANROHA25 on November 24, 2008 at 6:33 AM | link to this | reply

Sis, please take me for a walk.

"Come walk with me once again ...
this path I’m on is so lonely without you.
Come walk with me..." Excellent!you for this.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on November 24, 2008 at 6:26 AM | link to this | reply