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This one is hard for me to read. I have to feel you. no offense!

posted by Mystereo on November 29, 2008 at 10:30 PM | link to this | reply

It's burning in my heart .

posted by afzal50 on November 24, 2008 at 6:45 AM | link to this | reply

fire in heart, mind and soul....HAHA!

posted by Star5_ on November 24, 2008 at 6:26 AM | link to this | reply

What true emotion and honesty here...Wonderful work Jen!

posted by Wigopa_ on November 23, 2008 at 11:05 PM | link to this | reply

passionate, and written with the speed of a quick heartbeat. very creative

posted by Luz_Briar on November 23, 2008 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

I had to-(wanted to)-take a second look at this! It's very beautifull! Chri

posted by Scramble on November 23, 2008 at 1:29 PM | link to this | reply

Beautifully sensual Jen... Lovely as usual and very raw and honest.  Great work!

posted by Sinome on November 23, 2008 at 9:52 AM | link to this | reply