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Very pretty!
Loved the first stanza and I thought the last line was fantastic! Your poems have softness in them!
posted by
gypsypoet1975
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January 14, 2009
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Fantastic illustration of word, my friend...superb!
posted by
_teddypoet_
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November 26, 2008
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Now that was awesome!!!
Loved it..It so reminded me of the new movie that was released on Friday "Twilight"
posted by
Wigopa_
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November 23, 2008
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Wonderful! You appeal to the sensual and the dark side of experience to tranform within the gift of eternity. Wow!
posted by
merkie
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November 23, 2008
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That was amazing! What a poem!
Great imagery and contrast. The picture fits it so well.
posted by
calia14
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November 23, 2008
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I've missed your poetry, Ariala
And as always, you deliver excellent imagery and inspiration..
posted by
PoetRaye
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November 23, 2008
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well, what the heck is this???? a poem?????
geez....about time, my friend. hehe 
btw...it's fantastic!
posted by
shelly_b
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November 23, 2008
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Thank you, Chris...nice to see you again!
posted by
Ariala
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November 23, 2008
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I am quite speachless Ariala! This is Beautifull and together with the pic-
is a wonderfull combination.I have also 'caught up' on your other works--awesome! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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November 23, 2008
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cordwainer, I think you could write the next stanza! LOL Exactly...thank
you.
posted by
Ariala
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November 23, 2008
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Mystereo, thank you...glad you liked it.
posted by
Ariala
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November 23, 2008
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WOWOWOWOW!! What a masterpiece! This is tremendous!
the bat is a butterfly, the bouquet of dead leaves stained with blood have become an armful of living summer roses!!
posted by
cordwainer
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November 23, 2008
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very deep with a transformation great writing love the picture too. Awsome
posted by
Mystereo
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November 23, 2008
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