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magestic march of self-empowerment

posted by Luz_Briar on November 23, 2008 at 7:02 PM | link to this | reply

Wow!!!!!!!!

posted by 9STAR on November 23, 2008 at 4:17 PM | link to this | reply

 Excellent poem. 

posted by Kolekshuns on November 23, 2008 at 9:20 AM | link to this | reply

I have run far too long; now I am the pursuer

I loved that line!  Mal

posted by gapcohen on November 23, 2008 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

uncanny how you were the first one i came to after quite a long absence. the miscontrued notion will not reign. i am sure your wits will. great word play :)

posted by bythewindowsill on November 23, 2008 at 5:33 AM | link to this | reply

Brilliant Sam! Such a POSITIVITY around you! Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 23, 2008 at 4:44 AM | link to this | reply

You are a conqueror indeed and you shall win your battle.... my friend .

posted by afzal50 on November 23, 2008 at 4:25 AM | link to this | reply

like time travel in the battle of life force to make a way. Nice

posted by Mystereo on November 23, 2008 at 2:34 AM | link to this | reply

I learned a new word today.  I was not familiar with adient.  But, I think I shall not forget it now.

posted by TAPS. on November 22, 2008 at 11:01 PM | link to this | reply

This.. is an Awesome poem. It makes me feel "I'm ready for anything", bring it on.

posted by yellowrose55 on November 22, 2008 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

Onward Christian soldiers marching onto war. With the cross of Jesus

going on before. I just couldn't help myself when I read this.

posted by Kabu on November 22, 2008 at 7:56 PM | link to this | reply

Out to conquer... like the confidence you have in yourself.

posted by hardilaziz on November 22, 2008 at 7:37 PM | link to this | reply

What a poem!  a call to battle if I ever saw one... Loved the energy and the vitality in the verses.  WOnderful images and great flow make the one reading want to come and join forces with you to expose the bad guy.  Great work!  I hope you are feeling better sweetie.  xoxoxoxo

posted by Sinome on November 22, 2008 at 6:58 PM | link to this | reply