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No ones don't see all yet expected at such a high lever, no all is not

simple family expect it to be.

posted by Mystereo on February 8, 2009 at 8:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: calia-that's just great! I can truly relate to this one.Chris.

Thanks! I knew there'd be a fellow spaz-lol.

posted by calia14 on November 23, 2008 at 3:50 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Multitasking is the greatest!

That all depends on your attention span :) Multitasking for me sometimes results in burned french fries, wrinkled laundry, and forgotten plans. Thanks for stopping in, Mariss.

posted by calia14 on November 23, 2008 at 3:49 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Tuning in

Lol-thanks for reading my poem, I appreciate the feedback :) I suppose I was thinking of "transformation" differently than you intended, just a tad too literally. I'm gonna have to go back and read it again.

posted by calia14 on November 23, 2008 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

calia-that's just great! I can truly relate to this one.Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 23, 2008 at 4:40 AM | link to this | reply

Multitasking is the greatest!

posted by mariss9 on November 22, 2008 at 9:18 PM | link to this | reply

Quite wonderful and refreshing. Love it when someone can write about what they know bout best and make it simple and interseting. About the beginnings of memory--well that was the point. If we could get to the beginning it would take infinite regress which would probably depend on how many lifetimes we had, and if we were remembering them all we would be inconpacitated. This is not to say there is no beginning, it's just better to get all this thru osmosis, and be where we are--which was the point of the poem and the title: transformation, where we leave our past to become something else (tho within the same sync).
So, for me, it was just a point of tension between my being and not being--just another way of getting in tune. If I ever find what Im supposed to be tuned to, I'll let you know.