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This is way I love reading your work awaken the soul's imagination.
The way you like to put pictures with words I love doing that to but I some cases the words and picture blend. The background is beautiful but its, its, your point you are making. I didn't want to say nothing then I would not care about you craft, gift, talent. Amazing!
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Mystereo
on November 29, 2008 at 10:48 PM
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posted by
jacentaOld
on November 25, 2008 at 11:48 AM
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Yes ...
... reality will always be a step ahead ... 'cause it's the life - - genio
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ggXpress
on November 25, 2008 at 11:25 AM
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Lovely and dreamy!
posted by
Katray2
on November 23, 2008 at 2:07 PM
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I really liked that!
posted by
shelly_b
on November 23, 2008 at 12:00 PM
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Highly creative and thought inducing !
posted by
afzal50
on November 23, 2008 at 4:50 AM
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Absolutley wonderful! Almost like one line portrayed thru 3 acts, and I felt I was part of each one of them (and it let me catch my breath between scenes). So Im not going to tell you that you amaze me because I'd just confuse myself because I first sensed you were a painter, then a sculptureer (chiseling out a 3 dimensional)...aye-yaey-yaey (my hands in the air and my right palm hitting my forehead ((just stage directions))...and now a playwrite?.....Oh! the dramaturgy of it all!!
Well, what do I care? Go out and break another leg!
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jfm32
on November 22, 2008 at 1:58 PM
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Purple Mermaid--many thanks for leaving me your calling card! I'm extra
pleased beause it enabled me to choose to visit you-and I am so pleased that I have!! Your work is absolutely Beautifull-both words and pictures! Thank you.Chris.
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Scramble
on November 22, 2008 at 1:44 PM
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Wow Jen... That picture is right out of a dream... one I would not mind to have :-) Your poem is great as well dear and together they are a complete work of Art. Gorgeous!!! Love this new way you are presenting your work... It suits your verses and it makes it a feast to the eyes as well as the heart. Take care of you
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Sinome
on November 22, 2008 at 11:11 AM
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