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This is very cool.....lol, and clever too!
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kwjw88
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November 29, 2008
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Awsome! one a min one a hour to clever this piece is unreal great.
posted by
Mystereo
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November 22, 2008
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Awesome. Time and timelessness create magic.
posted by
hardilaziz
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November 22, 2008
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Highly profound and touching ....
posted by
afzal50
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November 22, 2008
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We need time travel to go back and get the job done!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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November 21, 2008
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posted by
Samantha39
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November 21, 2008
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Shelly
Very good, even though it's making me dizzy...
posted by
Nautikos
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November 21, 2008
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some days seem like the clock stops but for some reason the weeks slip by
posted by
lustorlove
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November 21, 2008
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Your creative poem "wound" me up. Seconds..minutes..hours and days go by and your poetry still amazes me.
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yellowrose55
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November 21, 2008
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Brilliant . . . You obviously feel time, not enough of us do . . . I wish I had your way with words . . .
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Soaker
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November 21, 2008
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Sam444
This is one of your best yet. It clearly shows some of us up short, round and round we go backward. Oh it has so much, is done so well. I love the minute on one hand and hour on the other to begin and end as it never gives more or takes away. Excellent. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
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November 21, 2008
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that last line was profound. i feel like it drove the point home.
posted by
Luz_Briar
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November 21, 2008
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very deep...does a clock merely count off time
or is the clock time itself? without measurement, is there time at all?
posted by
muley12
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November 21, 2008
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Great read Shelly with so many hidden thoughts to chase. It will take time to explore and like a shell game I need to find the timeLol Again you leave me thinking.
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merkie
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November 21, 2008
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Time is the great consumer
of our thoughts and our daydreams I think. Thanks for your comment on my site and have a good weekend.
posted by
malcolm
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November 21, 2008
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VERY CLEVER COMPARISON, TIME , A GREAT QUESTION AND MYSTERY FOR US ALL, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
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November 21, 2008
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Tick, tock...Goes the clock...
Sometimes we sit...Sometimes we run...But we always rock...Happy rocking my kind friend :)! - Ash
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ash_pradhan
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November 21, 2008
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Sam
We’re sometimes one step (or many steps) behind the speed of time but it’s a good thing that it all starts again giving us another chance to inch our way forward to our dreams, aspirations, or a better understanding of ourselves.
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Troosha
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November 21, 2008
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Wow...
I feel lost and yet enlightened... I think I need to have a lie down, and a think. Awesome poem!
posted by
lionreign
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November 21, 2008
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Life is rough when time distorts, Thanks for expressing that.
posted by
mariss9
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November 21, 2008
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Nice one...
posted by
_teddypoet_
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November 21, 2008
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Very Nice!
Gets you to thinking. Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
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November 21, 2008
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I think the hands of a clock....
...are easier on the psyche than the dripping of the sand in an hourglass, which is very stark, though
"time and tide wait for no man" regardless.
posted by
metalrat
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November 21, 2008
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Time never runs out...is always there is us that run out of life... Great poem Sammy.Luuuuve ya xoxo
posted by
Sinome
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November 21, 2008
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time is surely an interesting concept - especially to quantum physicists! Interesting, Sammy. Mal
posted by
gapcohen
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November 21, 2008
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A life lesson I've had to learn
just BE in the moment and don't relive the past and create your future with your best of thoughts.
posted by
skye08
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November 21, 2008
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An eternal truth my friend
there never seems to be enough time to do everything we really want to; even more reason to spend more of it being happy! Blessings Shelly - see you Monday
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mariaki
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November 21, 2008
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