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Very poetically expressed.  You definitely got your message across in great imagery.

posted by TAPS. on November 19, 2008 at 12:34 PM | link to this | reply

Your language and yourself gets there love

posted by BC-A on November 19, 2008 at 11:10 AM | link to this | reply

Powerful work, Sam..
Wishes for well being.

posted by PoetRaye on November 19, 2008 at 6:36 AM | link to this | reply

Most excellently put my dear Shelly
this silent indifference is such a dangerous thing in any relationship; awesome write my friend; many blessings and thanks (I hope you are feeling better sweetie)

posted by mariaki on November 19, 2008 at 6:12 AM | link to this | reply

number one aint free sam444 bitch!

posted by lestate7 on November 19, 2008 at 4:54 AM | link to this | reply

You've heard the expression, Cuts like a knife. Silence.......   This is an awesome poem. 

posted by yellowrose55 on November 19, 2008 at 12:15 AM | link to this | reply

Silent Indifference
Well put piece.

posted by demultiflex on November 18, 2008 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply

"For it is not I hiding behind silent indifference" I love this line. ... Good observations Sam!.

 

posted by merkie on November 18, 2008 at 9:47 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly
Excellent - and heart-rending...

posted by Nautikos on November 18, 2008 at 7:13 PM | link to this | reply

Wow Sam! This is superb. I do hope that you are feeling better. ~Peace, OTA

posted by OTA. on November 18, 2008 at 6:28 PM | link to this | reply

Sammy...this is one is my personal favorite of yours so far... I like it even better than the Cantos...and those were simply amazing.   ... you seem to be getting better and better... and there is no stopping you girl! I just want to say I am standing first  in line for that book... :-)  xoxo   

posted by Sinome on November 18, 2008 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful work...I have learned a lot in those words..As my own heart heals more everyday....Glad to see you are feeling better...And yes I am accepting .

posted by Wigopa_ on November 18, 2008 at 5:18 PM | link to this | reply

THE ONLY NOSIE WILL BE THE CLOSING OF THE DOOR, WHAT AN AWFUL SOUND IT IS , IF YOU ARE ON THE WRONG SIDE OF THE DOOR, THANKS ,KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on November 18, 2008 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

sometimes nothing can hurt more than apathy.  liked the emphasis on the tilte, Sammy

posted by Luz_Briar on November 18, 2008 at 3:41 PM | link to this | reply

Stunning work...superb!

posted by _teddypoet_ on November 18, 2008 at 3:36 PM | link to this | reply

this one
Very powerful stuff here. It zapped me to a place of my own, with people I have known. Thank you for sharing something so poignant.

posted by Imaginerain08 on November 18, 2008 at 3:28 PM | link to this | reply

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