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The furture belongs to those who perpare for it today. Malcom X.

posted by Mystereo on November 27, 2008 at 5:06 PM | link to this | reply

lost me for sec then you reagain my respect sharp.

posted by Mystereo on November 21, 2008 at 10:38 PM | link to this | reply

Short, sweat and very powerful. The future belongs those who prepare today.

posted by Mystereo on November 21, 2008 at 10:35 PM | link to this | reply

A most excellent display of your craft...I agree tomorrow always leads to a brighter day!

posted by Wigopa_ on November 19, 2008 at 11:20 PM | link to this | reply

I liked going from suddenly today to the very definition of Tomorrow! Awesome!

Side bar: regarding the prove you wrong on my lyric poem, when I publish a poem, I am out of it and it is up to my reader to glean what they will. My poetry is never about me but may contain parts of me. Once published I am disassociated from it and it is merely a poem to me. Reading any more into is futile! I do understand where you thought the first stanza was enough. It came together in rhyme and the rest of it builds upon the premise of the first stanza. It is something I will look at in the future to see if it needs to follow rhyme all the way through! I appreciate your comment! I am late returning a response due to fierce migraines these last 5 days! Thanks for your visits as well. sam

posted by sam444 on November 19, 2008 at 11:09 PM | link to this | reply

very thought provoking.. thank you ~Peace, OTA

posted by OTA. on November 18, 2008 at 1:21 PM | link to this | reply

jfm

must all tomorrows begin today?  Great line, great question? 

posted by Troosha on November 18, 2008 at 8:00 AM | link to this | reply

Probing and poignant questions.

posted by EX_TURPI on November 18, 2008 at 7:32 AM | link to this | reply

nice reflections...nice questions to ponder upon.

posted by zhemarie on November 18, 2008 at 5:15 AM | link to this | reply

Very self reflective  John... Beautifully written.  Loved the double entendre nd the way you drenched those lines in meaning. There is nothing superfluous, every word is perfectly placed.  Bravo!!!

posted by Sinome on November 17, 2008 at 9:05 PM | link to this | reply

I read several of your entries. . .great work. . . keep it up

posted by sintia56 on November 17, 2008 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply

Excellent so very concise and a question we all should consder. where do we proceed from today into tomorrow.The fire from the haystacks lighting our way!

posted by merkie on November 17, 2008 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply