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Awsome write for light shinning in friendship, advice for the healing time.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 13, 2008 at 7:43 PM
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Reality makes us feel differently no doubt .....
posted by
afzal50
on November 15, 2008 at 10:01 AM
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Yes, the second time through I began to see it more clearly.
Emotional intelligence clearly reflected...
Write on!
posted by
Pat_B
on November 15, 2008 at 7:19 AM
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Lovely tribute and empathy to the seeming darkening of your friends dreams. Hope they rise in the splendid light once again . You are a great friend .
posted by
merkie
on November 14, 2008 at 10:11 PM
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It always amazes me how other people can sense and catch onto what's happening way before I do. Me, I had to work myself thru a few reads to grop thru my feelings, which are still as vague as the sceens portrayed, and maybe that's what I like about it, because I find myself fumbling with indirect images (hey, what else is new?).
This is where I fell into the form of the painting--and I say a painting rather than a poem--not because the language is visual, but that the time and timing within a canvass could leave a different impression than words upon a page--unless ,of course, you were writing within the rhythmn of a play.
Poems are always a lot shorter than the life they are perceiving, which can make words seem a little weird, if not over-looking and unperceiving (unless they're not).
So, what makes art, art is its innate idea of composition.
So, there! I said it before I could confuse myself.
posted by
jfm32
on November 14, 2008 at 9:41 PM
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Re: what do you want ---- muley12 dear..........
that's rather harsh...maybe the last thing my friend needs
but of course it's your right to speak....thank you for reading dear.
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on November 14, 2008 at 5:05 PM
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what do you want a pity party someone to sorry for you
posted by
muley12
on November 14, 2008 at 4:59 PM
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reminds me if the end of childhood. mourning things that must go
posted by
Luz_Briar
on November 14, 2008 at 4:22 PM
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lovely dear, thanks for sharing
posted by
Samantha39
on November 14, 2008 at 12:18 PM
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Purple....What can i say...this is just a beautiful tribute....from the bottom of my heart I thank you....the images you displayed were just wonderful....here is a hug for you and yours
posted by
Wigopa_
on November 14, 2008 at 8:08 AM
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At least your relationship w/ your poetry works out fine love*
posted by
BC-A
on November 14, 2008 at 6:41 AM
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A lovely tribute my dear Jen
your friend should be very proud; beautifully done; many blessings and thanks and have a wonderful weekend my friend
posted by
mariaki
on November 14, 2008 at 4:51 AM
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very, very nice !!!!!!
posted by
jefco
on November 13, 2008 at 9:40 PM
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Beautiful my dear..absolutely pretty paintings......
posted by
Star5_
on November 13, 2008 at 9:16 PM
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Dear Jen. What a beautiful tribute to your friend... I am sure she is very thankful and touched by it. I love seeing you post regularly... I missed you when you were gone :-)
posted by
Sinome
on November 13, 2008 at 7:47 PM
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