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Sam this is totally awesome and more
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Justi
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October 20, 2009
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I am standing next to Naut waiting for the denouement as well :-) These are absolutely beautifully done Sam... don't touch a letter in them :-)
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Sinome
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November 11, 2008
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Shelly
I loved them the first time, and I love them still, and I am eagerly waiting for the
denouement...
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Nautikos
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November 11, 2008
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THANKS SAM FOR POSTING THESE AGAIN AND TOGETHER, AS I TOLD YOU BEFORE I JUST LOVE IT, I AM SURE THIS SCENE REPLAYS ITSELF MANY TIMES IN MANY PLACES EACH DAY, I STILL THINK THIS WOULD MAKE A GREAT MOVIE, THANKS AGAIN, KENT
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Riversidepoet
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November 11, 2008
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It's wonderful stuff, Sam. You make me want to visit that waterfront cafe by myself at setting sun and see what I could see.
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TAPS.
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November 11, 2008
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you leave us in anticipation of the next excerpt. So close and yet not here!
posted by
merkie
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November 11, 2008
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Hey sam
When you get a chance, read my new lyrics & new post from book 9. Read lyrics first!!
Max
posted by
contagion_publishing
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November 11, 2008
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Sam--how very LOVELY to have returned-just in time-to read this Beauty!
A WONDERFULL piece! Tranquill and pleasing to my mind.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
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November 11, 2008
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This reads like...Finding love at the beach! Not too much into poetic methods but I can appreciate the sense of mutual attraction!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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November 11, 2008
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Wow, it's been a while since I read such a long poem and....enjoyed it!
So, what will it come to? Will you continue with the story? I could see it as a small novel all on its own.
Giant!
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auslander
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November 11, 2008
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Very rich in imagery and the use of language.....a beautiful read, made me feel wistful for whatever reason....about what, I cannot name
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Krisles
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November 11, 2008
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