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Cool beans!!
Very nice voice.
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jefco
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November 11, 2008
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I stand before you to hear the songs of love ...
posted by
afzal50
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November 11, 2008
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i always look forward to reading your work (and your insightful comments to others), this is once again lovely, even though we hurt, we will always strive to love again. i liked the aura of one becoming two. beautiful. thank you.
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rubypoem
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November 11, 2008
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And fantastic imagery at that my dear Shelly
perfect example my excellent poetess; and as to your recommendations may I say I already have them on my faves list (great minds as they say
) Many blessings and thanks always my friend
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mariaki
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November 11, 2008
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A beautiful poetic picture of the process of falling in love! And thank for your words about my work Sam. Harpo47
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Harpo47
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November 11, 2008
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Concerning the DAISY FIELD
Thank you, I'm truly glad you like my work. I read a couple days ago, on Craig's List that short Horror Script Writers were needed. Therefore I came up with these Stories to entice whom it may concern, that I'm the man for the job.
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demultiflex
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November 10, 2008
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Oh Sam that is just beautiful... so romantic... There is nothing more sensual than a woman that tells it like it is. You say Pluto!!! and I say Galaxies and galaxies away and back still does not measure mine !!! xoxo
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Sinome
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November 10, 2008
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That's superb sis Shelly
"Your charm enlightens me ..
. I desire to experience you
", these remind me of the lines from Hamlet:
The nights are wholesome; then no planets strike,
No fairy takes, nor witch hath power to charm,
So hallow'd and so gracious is the time.
Love, all the way from my desert sands to you and yours
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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November 10, 2008
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...my defenses at rest. Hum.
I wish I could do that, someday.
posted by
Baf4yoo
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November 10, 2008
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its hard to stand when love is so frightful
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lustorlove
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November 10, 2008
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posted by
yellowrose55
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November 10, 2008
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I love this! The energy is congtagious, and it does call out for music.....I would not be surprised to learn you've done that, too.
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Krisles
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November 10, 2008
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Sign of personal growth...well-composed! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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November 10, 2008
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So well written, I love the rhythm of the words. Do you write songs? This one could be so beautiful with a jazzy South-American music.
As for Freeman, I just wrote a new entry about him, and me....LOL
posted by
auslander
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November 10, 2008
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Sam
To love and be loved we DO have stand outside ourselves – the risks great, the rewards even greater. Loved the piece!
posted by
Troosha
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November 10, 2008
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That's what I like about you sam,
always something different. you are not afraid to change up. I marvel at your creativity
posted by
muley12
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November 10, 2008
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A DIFFERENT CAST OF CHARACTERS , A DIFFERENT TIME, GREAT LINE, EVEN IF JUST IMAGERY, GREAT ADVICE, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
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November 10, 2008
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Excellent use of repetition! Well done!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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November 10, 2008
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great work
posted by
Samantha39
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November 10, 2008
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Images of healthy attitude. Positive and well written.
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merkie
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November 10, 2008
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