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Awesome work, Sinome!
Some things seem to haunt us for a lifetime
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Sunnybeach7
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November 11, 2008
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How are you doing my dear Sinome! Pluto! lol sammy
posted by
sam444
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November 10, 2008
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And yes, I'm being a good boy, not exerting my eyes. It's like the book - Freedom at Midnight, it says that the clock reads 10 minutes to midnight, but it has been stuck there for the last twenty years.
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Bhaskar.ing
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November 10, 2008
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You do need some sunshine dear princess. Winter is so symbolic of desolate days. As Shelley says, "If winter comes,can spring be far behind?" It is also the hymn of our world. xoxo:-)
- Life may change, but it may fly not;
- Hope may vanish, but can die not;
- Truth be veiled, but still it burneth;
- Love repulsed - but it returneth. Percy Bysshe Shelley
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Bhaskar.ing
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November 10, 2008
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you need some sunshine
posted by
lustorlove
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November 10, 2008
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Eloquent,if u keep an open heart, u'll also see some angels in there:)!-Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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November 10, 2008
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It'll always be memories ...
... and they still put their marks on the day today - -genio
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ggXpress
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November 10, 2008
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Sterling imagery Sinome! I was so taken with use of an apparition and the eloquent description of the ones from the past haunting stirred up memories for me. I think this is a mark of an excellent poem when it reaches out and touches the reader profoundly! Most awesome! PLUTO!!! sammy
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sam444
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November 10, 2008
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WHITE , BLANK WINTER DAYS, STIR UP A LOT OF FEELINGS, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
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November 10, 2008
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Deeply poignant, Sinome...
...and artfully and eloquently expressed, as usual.
Unfortunately, I can relate to the sentiments you've expressed here.
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metalrat
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November 10, 2008
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Sinome
Blank, but not empty,like canvases erased.
What a cool line though sometimes I think of that clean winter canvass as a source of new thoughts, new inspirations, but also, yes, something that makes us reflect upon times gone by.
posted by
Troosha
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November 10, 2008
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Ah the ghosts of creativeness haunt the author and will bless us always. Excellent write Marta.
posted by
merkie
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November 10, 2008
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Winter is depressing...must be the lack of sunlight and blue skies with puffs of cloud!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
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November 10, 2008
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posted by
9STAR
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November 10, 2008
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This is gorgeous
and reflects exactly how I was feeling yesterday.
posted by
malcolm
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November 10, 2008
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Sinome
'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all.
Alfred Lord Tennyson
posted by
Nautikos
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November 10, 2008
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You are so talented
A blank canvas for painting when the words float like snowflakes from the sky.
posted by
skye08
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November 10, 2008
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Beautiful! And that canvas erased! Harpo47
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Harpo47
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November 10, 2008
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you never forget them, they are carved in the palm of your hand
posted by
spiderfly
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November 9, 2008
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Marta, for God's sake, don't frighten me. We don't HAVE white blank skies in Miami, do we? Please, please say it was all your imagination.
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vogue
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November 9, 2008
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Beautiful. When the spring returns it brings with it new hopes and
ambitions and projects of course. Wiley says we sort of hibernate now so we have the energy needed in the Spring.
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Kabu
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November 9, 2008
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