Comments on haiku no. 22

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a lesson learned

always be prepared

take a pen and pad with you

where ever you go

 

Naut, it is such a shame when we lose our words...

sometimes the Muse tests us

posted by muser on June 4, 2009 at 1:02 PM | link to this | reply

Some of us should always carry a voice recorder

or a chorus following close by...  "Brave Sir Robin...!"

posted by Ciel on December 24, 2008 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

Speechless!

posted by Mystereo on December 15, 2008 at 7:12 PM | link to this | reply

This haiku #22 is Brilliantly twisted for sure.

posted by yellowrose55 on November 16, 2008 at 7:47 PM | link to this | reply

Very cool.  When I first read it my mind added the fourth line.  

In my car today
I thought a brilliant haiku
I could not write it
Can you?

posted by Smittenheimer on November 14, 2008 at 9:21 AM | link to this | reply

That was cute!

posted by shelly_b on November 13, 2008 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply

Now that sucks...

...but you got a good haiku out of it.

posted by metalrat on November 10, 2008 at 3:29 PM | link to this | reply

Naut

Those brilliant thoughts in a car can be most annoying because I inevitably forget them by the time I get to a pen and paper.  You, however, seemed to have remembered.   Too funny...

posted by Troosha on November 9, 2008 at 2:32 PM | link to this | reply

NAUTIKOS

Clever as ever

Naut will have the solution

Also the last word

posted by Krisles on November 9, 2008 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply

  Great unassuming haiku... :-)

posted by Sinome on November 8, 2008 at 8:28 PM | link to this | reply

This is so cool! To do without doing is astounding! I wish you would write more poetry, you have an untapped gift my dear Bro! Shelly

posted by sam444 on November 8, 2008 at 6:58 PM | link to this | reply

U forgot it by the time u got to the key-board

posted by Straightforward on November 8, 2008 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

HAHAHAHA,  You did, Nautikos.  This is it.
I hate it when I have a thought and cannot write it down, because later I can never remember, not even what it was about.

posted by TAPS. on November 8, 2008 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

What.. keeping it to yourself? LOL.. you are so clever~Peace, OTA

posted by OTA. on November 8, 2008 at 5:33 AM | link to this | reply

Inspirations arrive at the oddest times. A good haiku written!

posted by merkie on November 7, 2008 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply