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Re: merkie

  i just talk to a lot of wise people and read clever books, it's hard not to learn a little that way

posted by lionreign on November 10, 2008 at 8:18 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hardilaziz

Exactly!  thanks for stopping by

posted by lionreign on November 10, 2008 at 8:17 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Luz_Briar

If we let it, time saving will rush us through life... i choose not to

posted by lionreign on November 10, 2008 at 8:16 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Fantastic last verse

thanks for coming to share with me!  glad this hit a cord malcolm

posted by lionreign on November 10, 2008 at 8:16 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lion

Thanks Troosha! i am very glad you like this one

posted by lionreign on November 10, 2008 at 8:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: True to a T my friend!

Thank you, dear one, and Gandalf's words did help the inspiration on this one   Well spotted!

posted by lionreign on November 10, 2008 at 8:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam444

Thank you, especially for the comments on the punctuation - that is very helpful as I am working on my pacing at the moment

posted by lionreign on November 10, 2008 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

Always a wise outlook you share lion. Excellent!

posted by merkie on November 8, 2008 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply

Savour the moment. That's what you have.

posted by hardilaziz on November 8, 2008 at 3:43 AM | link to this | reply

great reminder. everything is so hectic and fast-paced these days

posted by Luz_Briar on November 7, 2008 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

Fantastic last verse

in particular. It is so fashionable to say that we are 'time poor' but we can all do something about it. These words really resonated with me and thanks for sharing.

posted by malcolm on November 7, 2008 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply

Lion

This is where most of us go wrong.  We fail to:   Experience the present
Before it's lost to the past.   I loved the flow as well as the message of this poem!

posted by Troosha on November 7, 2008 at 6:26 AM | link to this | reply

True to a T my friend!

we are all so busy rushing somewhere all the time; the intro actually reminded me of Gandalf's words......... super piece; many blessings and thanks and have a 'wiz' of a weekend

posted by mariaki on November 7, 2008 at 6:02 AM | link to this | reply

This is awesome for we forget to pause! I loved the cadence and I thought the punctuation was perfectly placed! It had a bubbly kind of pace to it! sam

posted by sam444 on November 6, 2008 at 9:55 PM | link to this | reply