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Good one

posted by freeflyinbird on November 11, 2008 at 4:49 AM | link to this | reply

Love it.... you've captured the moment magnificently.

posted by yellowrose55 on November 7, 2008 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome

posted by MiaElla on November 6, 2008 at 9:15 AM | link to this | reply

Topical and imaginative.

posted by hardilaziz on November 6, 2008 at 9:00 AM | link to this | reply

Sam

Loved the positive tone....

posted by Troosha on November 6, 2008 at 7:30 AM | link to this | reply

too much hope put on the shoulders of a man, who doesnt really make the decisions

posted by lustorlove on November 6, 2008 at 6:04 AM | link to this | reply

Even on this little island my dear Shelly

we are all very pleased with the outcome; please God this will be a most welcome change; well done U.S.; many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on November 6, 2008 at 5:05 AM | link to this | reply

You are so wise .

posted by afzal50 on November 6, 2008 at 2:48 AM | link to this | reply

I was

so swept up all the way over here!  Your poem catches the feeling

posted by KaBooM62 on November 6, 2008 at 1:36 AM | link to this | reply

i can almost feel the excitment and vibrating hope. your poems are always so effective in their description.thank you

posted by rubypoem on November 5, 2008 at 10:32 PM | link to this | reply

Great sentiment, interesting form . . .

posted by Soaker on November 5, 2008 at 9:30 PM | link to this | reply

good job, you've hit the nail on the head

posted by Samantha39 on November 5, 2008 at 5:17 PM | link to this | reply

I'd be hesitant

To become president.

Mal

posted by gapcohen on November 5, 2008 at 5:08 PM | link to this | reply

A change that is interesting and welcome.

posted by merkie on November 5, 2008 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, let us move forward with a fervent desire to do what is right for all.

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posted by ammon on November 5, 2008 at 2:18 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful poem Sam...got to run but will be back later to re-read it... xoxo

posted by Sinome on November 5, 2008 at 1:41 PM | link to this | reply

Jubilence and triumph

are woven through this excellent poem - Great job!

posted by lionreign on November 5, 2008 at 12:15 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Lotus_Flower on November 5, 2008 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply

How many schemes have you given us now, in examples of your own?    
Have you kept track?

posted by TAPS. on November 5, 2008 at 10:39 AM | link to this | reply