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Wonderful piece my dear Shelly
powerfully emotional and full of word magic as always a piece to be proud of; many blessings and thanks always
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mariaki
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November 5, 2008
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what a poignant, powerful, beautiful, expressive piece.
posted by
shamasehar
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November 5, 2008
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my eyes have been opened to such beautiful poetry since being on blogit. so rich, true,clever,unique, so many more words i wish i could choose, now left delightfully speechless, gazing at your masterpiece.
posted by
rubypoem
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November 5, 2008
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super damn you do it well
I luv every line you speak
posted by
lestate7
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November 4, 2008
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We are often without plea when we can't see our own wealth and good fortune. Excellent Sam.
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merkie
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November 4, 2008
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my scooner of lost dreams
posted by
lustorlove
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November 4, 2008
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Dear sis Shelly, I cannot express how very much I loved the poem. Simply remarkable, and the alliteration of the punch line makes it so memorable, although with a hint of pathos. It has so touched me, that's all I can say. Wow!!& a Kudos!!!
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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November 4, 2008
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Excellent
truly the path of the many
posted by
skye08
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November 4, 2008
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Such a powerful poem Sam...poignant and needy like a poor man's hunger. I love the way you use the nautical images...its so you... almost letting us get a glimpse of what is behind the verses, but not too clearly so to preserve the mystery. You just hint at the meanings allowing us to draw our own conclusions and apply the words to our own lives. Brilliant!
Oh and PS.and I luv you the mostest so
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Sinome
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November 4, 2008
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Strength and sadness stand together firm, stirring my emotions to wonder at the outcome
of no plea. Your poetry seems to always dance on the edge. Love it.
posted by
yellowrose55
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November 4, 2008
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