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very ryhthmic. great message too
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Luz_Briar
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November 4, 2008
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It blows me away love
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BC-A
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November 4, 2008
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Great meter, great rhyme,great story
posted by
muley12
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November 4, 2008
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Clever!
I like the journey this one takes! Good write
posted by
lionreign
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November 4, 2008
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Sam
We all need to follow our internal lodestar from time to time and we can only hope that it guides us to a place of tranquility…. 
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Troosha
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November 4, 2008
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Ah, tranquility - hard won, beautifully wrought, Dear Sam...
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PoetRaye
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November 4, 2008
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Shelly
If it takes meekness to experience tranquility, I guess there's no hope for me...
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Nautikos
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November 4, 2008
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WOW my dearest Shelly
I have missed your posts very much; you never ever fail to disappoint; this is truly an awesome write; thank you and many blessings to you and yours always
posted by
mariaki
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November 4, 2008
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Tranquility is our birth right .....Turmoil is our destiny .
posted by
afzal50
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November 4, 2008
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When tranquility goes out the door, I usually have a great desire to follow close behind. LOL
posted by
TAPS.
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November 4, 2008
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what fluid thoughts. beautifully woven
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bythewindowsill
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November 4, 2008
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Thanks :-) and sweet dreams to you too Sammy...xoxoxo
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Sinome
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November 3, 2008
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hey! superjust got back love this poem !
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lestate7
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November 3, 2008
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"when you speak you address my soul" - actually from a song, but your poems certainly touch my soul. It is so beautifully written, i hope from reading your words i can learn grace with my pen.
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rubypoem
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November 3, 2008
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I loved the last two lines. Such powerful words, so softly whispered. And thanks for stopping by. Love your comments too.
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vogue
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November 3, 2008
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Wow, so much emotion flows from sweet to sad to searching... then peace took over
in this beauty of a poem.
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yellowrose55
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November 3, 2008
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Tranquility be what you seek,
"Tis ours" sighed the meek! Whispers of the past.We chase them around and around 'til we let go. Tranquility gained.
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merkie
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November 3, 2008
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Soo wonderfuly writen sam I loved it!
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Katherine_Ann
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November 3, 2008
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Absolutely fantastic. Amazing how you can portray such profound experiences in words, so difficult to express in prose. I'll save it, so that this remains etched in my mind... Ok, sis? Love to you and yours from your bro.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
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November 3, 2008
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Nice
posted by
lustorlove
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November 3, 2008
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Beautifully written
posted by
skye08
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November 3, 2008
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Wow, you never cease to astound me Sammy... amazing write. love you much... xoxo
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Sinome
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November 3, 2008
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thumbs up is what I says
posted by
Kabu
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November 3, 2008
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glad I stubbled on this
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Samantha39
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November 3, 2008
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