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VERY good rhythm. Loved how the first paragraph is humbling and remindful that even the smallest, most seemingly insignificant deed, benefits mankind. And then the humorous twist with the second part! Very good!!
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gypsypoet1975
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January 12, 2009
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Bravo! Love the picture your setting the real you bought it all to life.
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Mystereo
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November 30, 2008
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Another trip down memory lane for me sweetie
this image so vividly described is all I have left to remind me of autumn and winter as we have no autumn here and very little winter - the sun is still shining and I do so miss the seasons; many blessing and thanks for the memory
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mariaki
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November 4, 2008
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Awesome! I could see and am waiting for them to finally blow off the trees to get blown away! lol I loved the imagery and the cadence was especially smooth! sam
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sam444
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November 3, 2008
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good occupation for the gentleman. Lovely poem Taps. Colorful leaves will soon shiver under the chilly winter breath. Getting colder here today Brrr
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merkie
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November 3, 2008
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Wiley doesn't rake the leaves and I am so glad. They lay around
in mountains of Gold turning deep brown crisp like over baked cookies and they mush down beneath the snow making fertilizer for next years grasses.
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Kabu
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November 3, 2008
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Ha! That's awesome!
At our condo I swore that maintenance sucked up the leaves as they fell! I say leave em for as long as possible...I got lots of them around me now. Hmm...guess they'll need to be raked! Eek!
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ginnieb
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November 3, 2008
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