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Liked it all up until Chapter 7
anxiously awaiting Chapter 8

posted by StrickGold on November 11, 2009 at 3:02 PM | link to this | reply

Wow! Good story..
Hope you will put the full version here.. either as posts or item for sale, because I believe a lot of us want to read it.. Also, congratulations on your first $5.00 .. Wish you all the best for the future..

posted by orcalion on November 7, 2008 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

ANROHA25
Well done luv and congratulations on your $5.00 cheque. You are a good young writer heading to be a great older writer. Love to ya kiddo Wiley and Kabu

posted by WileyJohn on November 6, 2008 at 5:53 PM | link to this | reply

A very easy read. Keep on working.

posted by Kabu on November 5, 2008 at 5:03 PM | link to this | reply

    I love your details.  Its like I am sitting there with the family.   

posted by ravenmarie on November 2, 2008 at 8:55 PM | link to this | reply

Hey sweetie! You are such a good writer! You get a little of everything in! I do not know how to do a picture but I will find someone to help you! I am so proud of you and so happy you will get a check! I think we are professional writers now, we have been paid! lol Love to you my dear friend! Shelly

posted by sam444 on November 2, 2008 at 1:42 PM | link to this | reply