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You blowed my mind as lines crank my heart, your content is great!
posted by
Mystereo
on December 13, 2008 at 10:03 PM
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Great rhythm until the last line. See if you can rewrite it to the same beat as the rest. Yet it say much.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on October 31, 2008 at 12:06 PM
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Amen! I think that is very true! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 31, 2008 at 2:20 AM
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very well said
posted by
Star5_
on October 30, 2008 at 5:57 PM
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