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Re: Lion

Thanks Troosha - me too.  I think I have some growing to do before that kind of relationship can be a reality, but I am working on that

posted by lionreign on October 31, 2008 at 9:39 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I found this really moving

Thank you very much.  It is important to me that my work is accessible because the meaning is the important thing - the verse is mostly a way to communicate it

posted by lionreign on October 31, 2008 at 9:37 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Luz_Briar

Thank you - I have had relationships like the first stanza's and they have all failed.  Now I am hoping for one like the second

posted by lionreign on October 31, 2008 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam

Thank you  - I was feeling inspired by perceived change, or at least the beginnings of it

posted by lionreign on October 31, 2008 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

Thank you, Sinome, I am especially glad you enjoyed this one

posted by lionreign on October 31, 2008 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: true thoughts mafe lovely

Thank you

posted by lionreign on October 31, 2008 at 9:21 AM | link to this | reply

Re: the best way...

I believe so... harder to achieve though

posted by lionreign on October 31, 2008 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Yes ... that's right ...

Absolutely genio, as soon as you need your partner to feel whole you begin to kill the fires

posted by lionreign on October 31, 2008 at 9:16 AM | link to this | reply

Re: OTA

Thanks! 

posted by lionreign on October 31, 2008 at 9:14 AM | link to this | reply

Lion

“Uninspired” love is kind of stagnant place to be.  Your second verse conveys your longing for something deeper and more meaningful.  I hope you find it or can create it. 

posted by Troosha on October 31, 2008 at 6:41 AM | link to this | reply

I found this really moving

and your verses are so accessible which I believe poetry really should be. Thanks also for you comment on my blog.

posted by malcolm on October 31, 2008 at 5:35 AM | link to this | reply

elogant way of saying this. and refreshing to read a realistic love poem like this.

posted by Luz_Briar on October 30, 2008 at 11:37 PM | link to this | reply

And we might find a way to be
More in love than we ever knew

This is a wonderful close with such strength! It truly made the poem very effective in producing awesome imagery with the references to one another! sam

posted by sam444 on October 30, 2008 at 8:30 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely Lion... heartfelt and so romantic :-)

posted by Sinome on October 30, 2008 at 8:24 PM | link to this | reply

true thoughts mafe lovely

posted by mysteria on October 30, 2008 at 8:03 PM | link to this | reply

the best way...

posted by 9STAR on October 30, 2008 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply

Yes ... that's right ...

... both independent 'cause, then the fire can burn without being dependent of the other one to keep it alive ... that makes projections and blaming and; it's the start of turning off the fire, and love - - genio

 

posted by ggXpress on October 30, 2008 at 3:16 PM | link to this | reply

I like this.. maybe we all need a good shake up in a relationship sometimes.~Peace, OTA

posted by OTA. on October 30, 2008 at 2:43 PM | link to this | reply