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Shelly, dear,
I must confess, I was a little lost, but your explanation helped bring it into focus...

posted by Nautikos on October 31, 2008 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

Yeah it would've been above me without your explanation but that's poetry. After all look whose talking.

posted by mordent on October 31, 2008 at 10:01 AM | link to this | reply

Of course I had to go back and read it again after you mentioned the female singer.  That brought a whole different image to mind.  There's so many ways to read a poem.

posted by TAPS. on October 31, 2008 at 9:11 AM | link to this | reply

You are a true inspiration!

~*~^i^~*~

posted by Itza on October 31, 2008 at 8:54 AM | link to this | reply

Simply Fantastic, Dear Sam! I love your word choices..
  

posted by PoetRaye on October 31, 2008 at 7:54 AM | link to this | reply

Very Cool, with a flowing drum beat... makes me wonder

posted by yellowrose55 on October 31, 2008 at 4:19 AM | link to this | reply

sad for the singer. lovely rhymes, though

posted by Luz_Briar on October 30, 2008 at 11:35 PM | link to this | reply

BEautifully done Sammy... Loved the way you arranged the verses and carried me through the end... I am with Krisles  you are Brilliant! 

posted by Sinome on October 30, 2008 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful use of words.....actutally utilizing the meanings!  You are so brilliant!

posted by Krisles on October 30, 2008 at 7:27 PM | link to this | reply

posted by 9STAR on October 30, 2008 at 6:03 PM | link to this | reply

I like the ambiance of this
I just keep rereading it

posted by lionreign on October 30, 2008 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

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