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posted by Star5_ on November 2, 2008 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

The Sand Lady hasn't done anything really bad though. But she's definitely a mystery. Who is she and what does she want? Great Story.

posted by yellowrose55 on October 31, 2008 at 4:27 AM | link to this | reply

    Oooh!  I can hardly wait for the next chapter. 

posted by ravenmarie on October 30, 2008 at 9:05 PM | link to this | reply

Hey sweetie! You do an excellent job with dialogue! I am very impressed. This work is a fine example for young writers, but any writer could benefit! Kudos my sweet friend! Shelly

posted by sam444 on October 30, 2008 at 6:22 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Star5_ on October 30, 2008 at 5:45 PM | link to this | reply