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posted by
Star5_
on November 2, 2008 at 7:58 AM
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The Sand Lady hasn't done anything really bad though. But she's definitely a mystery. Who is she and what does she want? Great Story.
posted by
yellowrose55
on October 31, 2008 at 4:27 AM
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Oooh! I can hardly wait for the next chapter.
posted by
ravenmarie
on October 30, 2008 at 9:05 PM
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Hey sweetie! You do an excellent job with dialogue! I am very impressed. This work is a fine example for young writers, but any writer could benefit! Kudos my sweet friend! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on October 30, 2008 at 6:22 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on October 30, 2008 at 5:45 PM
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