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We all fit in somewhere.
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merkie
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October 28, 2008
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Other people always look so certain and strong, don't they? Odds are that they are not...
The only route to wisdom is through questioning, though, so it is a good thing.
I love the imagery in this.. I can just imagine you in that bar
posted by
lionreign
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October 28, 2008
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Sinome...
I think everyone questions. It may seem like others know what they are doing, but I think most are unsure of things.
This reminds me how I often times just watch people....think about their lives, etc.
posted by
Sunnybeach7
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October 28, 2008
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Sinome
Thanks for your comments and thanks for this wonderful poem. Feel free to correct me any time Sinome, I enjoy your work as well and I understand you mean no harm by telling me of my mistakes, don't be fooled there not typo's I simply just misspelled the words I do it often, I have never claimed to be the sharpest tool in the shed, so feel free to help anytime. God bless.
posted by
RITE2SPIN
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October 28, 2008
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Sinome
Don’t be fooled by the “fast stride”. It’s not necessarily a sign of determination or purpose but more often than not a means of staying one step ahead of their confusion or the very same questions you’re asking yourself. They’re no more sure of their destination than you – they only look that way. 
posted by
Troosha
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October 28, 2008
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..because you're a mystic...
...astrologer shamen just know these things... trust me... Beautiful poem as always, and I've been in that bar more than a few times myself...
posted by
MasonGarrett
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October 28, 2008
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What an interesting poem, Sinome. It is written from a perspective that I don't know much about. I have never taken problems to a bar. If I cannot solve them on my own, I take them to the Lord in prayer and leave them there and go on with something else.
posted by
TAPS.
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October 28, 2008
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You are here for a very special lesson to learn
As you move on your path of enlightenment, you will come to realized what a special opportunity you have to move toward the oneness with the All. You are transitioning to a higher astral plane as you learn and master the lessons of opportunity presented to you.
posted by
skye08
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October 27, 2008
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Wish you all the best. To answer your question, God created everyone a unique personality.
posted by
hardilaziz
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October 27, 2008
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I WISH FOR YOU THE JOY AND PEACE THAT COMES WITH KNOWING, A KIND HEART LIKE YOURS SHOW KNOW, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
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October 27, 2008
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that's ok, some people can't spell :)...but u r not one of 'em...hahaha!
posted by
ash_pradhan
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October 27, 2008
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ok, ok..i buy ur explanation :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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October 27, 2008
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What's a nice lady like u doing in a sleazy bar anyway :)? - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
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October 27, 2008
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Excellent! . . . Intense, vivid . . . Thank you . . .
posted by
Soaker
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October 27, 2008
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Maybe it's only ...
... masks you're looking at; people's needed masks for moving along ...
but ... haven't we all, in past, now and then, boosted along with absolute security of being right ... before life hits us for the teaching that asking questions are wise - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
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October 27, 2008
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It is because you are very special. Great work as always
posted by
Smittenheimer
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October 27, 2008
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