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This poem triggers my hug reflex...

beautifully written, it feels so sincere

posted by lionreign on October 28, 2008 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

Glad I stopped by

And not just for the poetry lesson, but for the tip about Anroha.  I followed the link to her blog and left a comment on one of the posts, and will return to click on all of them to help her reach her goal.  I've often admitted I don't read much poetry.  It just doesn't seem to be my thing.  But it was a rewarding experience in more ways than one.  I'm trying to become more appreciative and perceptive, and I shall return.

posted by notapoet on October 28, 2008 at 5:23 AM | link to this | reply

You are always so thoughtful and concerned about everyone.

 Thanks.

posted by afzal50 on October 28, 2008 at 4:21 AM | link to this | reply

Great poem.  Good suggestion for ANDROHA.  You are a sweetie.

posted by TAPS. on October 28, 2008 at 1:08 AM | link to this | reply

Great poem

It is alway best to bid adieu to the past

posted by skye08 on October 27, 2008 at 9:17 PM | link to this | reply

Food for thought sam ... the past is just a goodbye .. next poem Today?

posted by merkie on October 27, 2008 at 8:11 PM | link to this | reply

that was interesting to read.

I love reading your poems, how have you been latly?

posted by Katherine_Ann on October 27, 2008 at 8:06 PM | link to this | reply

sad and beautiful.

posted by Baf4yoo on October 27, 2008 at 8:00 PM | link to this | reply

wonderful poem my friend... "my disguise is glamour"   just wonderful!

posted by Sinome on October 27, 2008 at 7:35 PM | link to this | reply

Always excellent. "Just a good-bye", I love the way you got there.

posted by yellowrose55 on October 27, 2008 at 3:22 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly

I love that last line, too! Very profound... But, even more.....I love another form! Where do you come up with all these? Is there a book of them...of course there is, I'm too lazy to look....but I so love playing with words....when I ever have time....seems all I do these days is work, work, work....but I so need to do something else with my mind....and exercising with words is just the thing when I'm in a mood like this....I'll have to give this one a try.  You are such a gift, in sooooo many ways

posted by Krisles on October 27, 2008 at 1:46 PM | link to this | reply

Sam444

This is great, thanks for the note on the little girl.

posted by Justi on October 27, 2008 at 12:02 PM | link to this | reply

Sam

“The past is just good-by” – loved that close!

posted by Troosha on October 27, 2008 at 9:15 AM | link to this | reply

How do you do it? So many styles, so many stories, but always perfect! If the weather permits, I'll try to go for a Giant's tour! PS: we need a bike emoticon!

posted by auslander on October 27, 2008 at 7:29 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely verse

especially the ending.

posted by malcolm on October 27, 2008 at 6:55 AM | link to this | reply