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 It reminds me of Henry James if he would write in a common vernacular today. w/TLC, BCA ***** Bill*s Wae:: Bog on *****

posted by BC-A on October 24, 2008 at 7:57 AM | link to this | reply

and then...
it is amazing what strangers can do sometimes- and we keep telling our children not to trust them. but in today's world, one never knows when trust is misplaced. you've got me hooked.

posted by bythewindowsill on October 24, 2008 at 1:16 AM | link to this | reply

Loved this... can't wait for more :-)

posted by Sinome on October 23, 2008 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply