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Shelly
Describing dream-works so eloquently...

posted by Nautikos on October 21, 2008 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply

I am WOWED once again.

posted by yellowrose55 on October 20, 2008 at 10:27 PM | link to this | reply

Super , super , SupEr  I sent your books out today

and the collection of all langston hughes collection luv you sam!

Osiris

posted by lestate7 on October 20, 2008 at 4:39 PM | link to this | reply

The hasped chamber of dreams... Always unique word choices. It is different to see rhyming couplets as we seem to use more blank verse. Excellent style and vocabulary.

posted by merkie on October 20, 2008 at 11:38 AM | link to this | reply

No one could have said this better than my sis Shelly ... dreams as "paralyzed prisoners". Wonderful, wonderful  work. 4m your admiring bro.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on October 20, 2008 at 10:49 AM | link to this | reply

VERY NICE, GREAT ENDING, THANKS KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on October 20, 2008 at 9:21 AM | link to this | reply

 Dreams resemble the other side love*** w/TLC, BCA *** bILL*S /WAVE:: God bless n' blog on ***

posted by BC-A on October 20, 2008 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent work my dear Shelly
Not enough of us realise the potency of our dreams; many blessings and thanks always my friend

posted by mariaki on October 20, 2008 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply

I love it! As I love dreaming too! But tell me, what does "aswoon" mean?

posted by auslander on October 20, 2008 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

Sam
Conversely, sometimes they awaken us to possibilities and arouse that muse.  

posted by Troosha on October 20, 2008 at 6:44 AM | link to this | reply

Powerfully done, Dear Sam!
 

posted by PoetRaye on October 20, 2008 at 6:31 AM | link to this | reply

dreams seemed to have capture blogit lately are we all hoping to find our dreams in real life

posted by lustorlove on October 20, 2008 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

This is very good
I have read it twice and will do so a little more I think, the final line is incredible but I seem to find somethign different every time I read it.  Great job

posted by lionreign on October 20, 2008 at 3:25 AM | link to this | reply

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