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Amazing piece you put this together wall I could feel and hear your words.

posted by Mystereo on December 13, 2008 at 9:37 PM | link to this | reply

JUMP RIGHT IN, IT IS QUITE A RIDE, ESPECIALLY FOR A SAND FLEA, THANKS KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on October 18, 2008 at 5:21 PM | link to this | reply

Wow! O wow! I love this poem! Especially:                                                                                              I am none of these,
just the one who dared
the high tide
at dawn.
Just fantastic imagery. Thanks for writing a poem. Hope the pinky is better soon. I love the imagery! I have mised your poetry! sam

posted by sam444 on October 18, 2008 at 3:00 PM | link to this | reply

" the one who dared
the high tide
at dawn." Awesome summary and thoughts. A real gift to the reader.

posted by merkie on October 18, 2008 at 12:31 PM | link to this | reply

So lovely and flowing, Ariala! Been waiting for some new poems..:)

  

posted by PoetRaye on October 18, 2008 at 11:27 AM | link to this | reply

 Good enough *** Sam's excellent *** w/TLC for both of you loves*** BCA *** Bill*s Wave*** Blog on x two too!

posted by BC-A on October 18, 2008 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply

Ariala

Oh, how the mystic of the ocean can inspire so many wonderful thoughts.  Strange how both of us today referred to the ebb and flow of the ocean…..   

posted by Troosha on October 18, 2008 at 6:59 AM | link to this | reply

I'm glad you made it back to shore :)

The toss and turns life gives us. I love your metaphors :)

posted by Lotus_Flower on October 18, 2008 at 5:27 AM | link to this | reply