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Sam1

Don't lose that child in you... It's almost always easy to... when your once bitten, next thing you know, you're twice shy.... enjoy the roller coaster... enjoy the skiing... enjoy the moment... you're excitement in this entry makes me smile... 

posted by 1AMIHAN1 on October 19, 2008 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

Range of emotions - Excellently written, Sam!

 

posted by PoetRaye on October 17, 2008 at 6:34 AM | link to this | reply

I'm with mariaki here...

Fictional Eliot needs a good talking to   The shattering of hope on the rocks of reality's indifference is always a trauma, be it small or large.

this encapsulates it to perfection.

posted by lionreign on October 17, 2008 at 4:37 AM | link to this | reply

Shelly

I got so caught up in this tale I found myself thinking how rude this Elliott is!  Better that he didn't call - he sounds like a .......... anyway!  Great stuff my friend; many blessings and thanks for a wonderful weekend

posted by mariaki on October 17, 2008 at 4:26 AM | link to this | reply

WoW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

am happy for you......keep believing the imagery will happen for real!

posted by 9STAR on October 17, 2008 at 3:00 AM | link to this | reply

 superstr whats up I got some copies of my book I want

to send it to you ! how can we trade e-mails love U

posted by lestate7 on October 17, 2008 at 12:45 AM | link to this | reply

Very well done... Loved the running theme...it felt almost like a play :-)  Great poem!

posted by Sinome on October 16, 2008 at 9:55 PM | link to this | reply

This is how it goes sometimes, the dating game. Everything is fine and then . . . their gone.

Pretty cool Idea - in "Note form (an Epistle-had to look the word up, interesting and Wonderfully Unique, feel like I'm snooping through someone's personal letters.

posted by yellowrose55 on October 16, 2008 at 9:47 PM | link to this | reply

sam, the ice rink sounds very inviting...I love a good fast skate...:)

Or a nice slow one with Liz's hand in mine...:)

posted by Rumor on October 16, 2008 at 7:49 PM | link to this | reply

Well, you knew that I would enjoy this

I will return to Unsaid blog when the book is done.

posted by Azur on October 16, 2008 at 7:18 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly

Really very well done - and so sad...

posted by Nautikos on October 16, 2008 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply

Very beautiful and romanitc ..

posted by afzal50 on October 16, 2008 at 6:06 PM | link to this | reply

You really wrote a romantic poem tossed it. I can just imagine how she felt heartbroken I can't wait to see what happen's next.

 

posted by sunsirae on October 16, 2008 at 5:54 PM | link to this | reply

I really like the rhythm of this one; it's like a song, a sad blues song (with a singer from the bayou).

posted by auslander on October 16, 2008 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

QUITE A STORY TELLER YOU ARE, THANKS KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on October 16, 2008 at 3:50 PM | link to this | reply

that was sad...very sad somehow the way the narrator stays so gentle throughout the whole thing

posted by Luz_Briar on October 16, 2008 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply

Nice write

I really loved the imagery.  I could see and feel this happening.  I guess we've all been down this road.

posted by skye08 on October 16, 2008 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

I hate one night stands. You always think they go well,

and maybe, they did, but that is no reason for a man

to call again. He is surfing his opportunities, each woman

a new challenge...the older I get the less I like a womanizer.

When I was young I laughed at them. 

 

posted by Winged on October 16, 2008 at 12:15 PM | link to this | reply

how sad, are you living my life?

posted by lustorlove on October 16, 2008 at 12:06 PM | link to this | reply

I enjoyed reading this...

posted by _Symphony_ on October 16, 2008 at 11:43 AM | link to this | reply

sam

 post from book 8 & b-day wish in random blog!!!

Max

posted by contagion_publishing on October 16, 2008 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

Yes, tell us more :)

posted by Lotus_Flower on October 16, 2008 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply

Too bad -but such great fun to imagine! Tell us more in this romance Sam.

posted by merkie on October 16, 2008 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply