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Great write.
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Kolekshuns
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December 28, 2008
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Speechless.
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Mystereo
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December 21, 2008
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Awesome as always...Where have you been?
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Wigopa_
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December 14, 2008
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wow sending shivers down my spin! Dear!
I always love poetry! Sorry I havnt been around to read much of it latly. Will soon enough!
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Katherine_Ann
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November 25, 2008
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posted by
9STAR
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October 21, 2008
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truck loads of fun
posted by
poetperson
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October 19, 2008
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the fire stained chimneys wild children thrown balls flows the creek flow
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Smittenheimer
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October 17, 2008
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Gripping
i absolutely love this one. your word choices and message appealed very strongly to me! your entries just keep getting better and better!
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Luz_Briar
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October 16, 2008
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I see this is a continuation of the last poem and my understanding is enhanced by reading both. I like the line of the misscarriage of justice etc. Good comment on the stressed world of forever.
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merkie
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October 14, 2008
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