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As Mariaki said "an unexpected piece" but the panic... it bleeds through the prose.
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Troosha
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October 14, 2008
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Frightening..
Makes me think of my friends in the Search and Rescue team and the people I did First Aid Training with.. One day, this might happen to any of us.. Great piece!
posted by
orcalion
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October 14, 2008
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You captured the moment and paniced us somewhat with the intensity of this write. Take care Sam!
posted by
merkie
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October 13, 2008
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this one had me confused, is it me or what?
posted by
lustorlove
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October 13, 2008
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Intense and powerful!
posted by
PoetRaye
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October 13, 2008
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The Edge of Panic
Well illustrated.
posted by
mousehop
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October 13, 2008
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I feel worried .. Please take care .
posted by
afzal50
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October 13, 2008
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Oh my Shelly!
A most unexpected piece indeed; actually rather than end of life it seemed to me like a panic attack - these feelings are the same; an excellent piece all the same my friend; many blessings and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
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October 13, 2008
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I often wondered what people might feel. You have said it, terrifyingly clear.
posted by
vogue
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October 13, 2008
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wow. unexpected and enthralling.
posted by
Luz_Briar
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October 12, 2008
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Sam... that was amazing...In a few lines you captured th e terror, the panic of the end of a life. Great work.
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Sinome
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October 12, 2008
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I have felt your pain.
I remember those days of "being there" and my beeper going off because I was on call and patients needed something and juggling the time. Thank God for my Mom. Many times I ran in just in time to do the finishing touches and finding a seat and a quick kiss at the end of her performance and off on the road again.
posted by
skye08
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October 12, 2008
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Shelly
My claustrophobic soul shudders...
posted by
Nautikos
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October 12, 2008
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Short and frightening.... Mal
posted by
gapcohen
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October 12, 2008
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Frightening,
this is . . . . .scary. I'm just right there with them - TRAPPED. I'm always on
the edge of my seat with your writing.
posted by
yellowrose55
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October 12, 2008
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oh my goodness...how heart thudding!
made me shiver and gave me goosbumps
posted by
Katherine_Ann
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October 12, 2008
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