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This is beautiful poetry

posted by callista on October 10, 2008 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply

Shelly this is so beautiful............

wistful and romantic; a perfectly gorgeous piece my friend, very well done; many blessings and thanks; have a blissful weekend

posted by mariaki on October 10, 2008 at 5:46 AM | link to this | reply

Once again once again my friend ...

posted by afzal50 on October 10, 2008 at 3:01 AM | link to this | reply

once again more great words. You write with such emotion. Keep them coming.

posted by LJMaggie on October 9, 2008 at 11:21 PM | link to this | reply

What can I say . . . wow, flowing and warm, such a beautiful call to love again.

posted by yellowrose55 on October 9, 2008 at 10:42 PM | link to this | reply

MY FLAME MERE EMBERS, SO TOUCHING, THANKS KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on October 9, 2008 at 7:24 PM | link to this | reply

Shelly, Sis,

This is beautiful and touching in its simplicity, its directness...its display of longing...

posted by Nautikos on October 9, 2008 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

there you did it again

posted by lustorlove on October 9, 2008 at 5:35 PM | link to this | reply

You've made me cry

you brought back all the pain and heartache I ever felt from my many lost loves. Thanks for nuttin'

posted by muley12 on October 9, 2008 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

Commonality

Beauty in your words... always.  Commonality of the human heart in a soul that sings out.

joe

posted by LongoGeremia on October 9, 2008 at 4:20 PM | link to this | reply

a wonderful poem about an all too common sentiment - great writing! 

posted by Jack_Shackleton on October 9, 2008 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

Words fail me Sam... I am so moved by your poem.  Just wonderful

posted by Sinome on October 9, 2008 at 12:18 PM | link to this | reply

uh - that should be creativity - no wonder i suck at writing

posted by ladychardonnay on October 9, 2008 at 10:54 AM | link to this | reply

where does all of this creatism come from?? i couldn't write a poem if i tried - once again - wonderful writing

posted by ladychardonnay on October 9, 2008 at 10:53 AM | link to this | reply

A beautiful melody of words love*** w/TLC, BCA *** Bill*s Wave*** Blog on!

 

posted by BC-A on October 9, 2008 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

Sam...

  this is so beautifully sad - brilliantly written, and I am almost speechless

posted by lionreign on October 9, 2008 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

a sweet enduring invitation............

posted by Samantha39 on October 9, 2008 at 9:39 AM | link to this | reply

So poignant and so sad. Lost love can never be rekindled, so it's best to keep sweet and melancholic memories.

posted by vogue on October 9, 2008 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

sam

 Part three of the epic poem posted in Book 8 & post in random blog.

Max

posted by contagion_publishing on October 9, 2008 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

Passage through life can be so lonely. Excellent sam.I particularly like the conclusion.

posted by merkie on October 9, 2008 at 8:56 AM | link to this | reply

Sam

... a beautiful and eloquent invitation!

posted by Troosha on October 9, 2008 at 8:55 AM | link to this | reply