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 Aah you write such far extending language love*** w/TLC, BCA Bill’s Wave Blog on!

 

posted by BC-A on October 8, 2008 at 9:11 AM | link to this | reply

Sam you are a genius

what a fabulously insightful poem, it has so much impact from such simple images - Well done!

posted by lionreign on October 8, 2008 at 7:47 AM | link to this | reply

this is a hard thing to admit

yet you found & expressed it beautifully. i can feel the pain through your words 

posted by pelagus on October 8, 2008 at 7:28 AM | link to this | reply

Most Excellent, Dear Sam! Moving in all the ways only a truly great poem

can be.  

posted by PoetRaye on October 8, 2008 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

Sam

Although this may have been “messing with imagery” this line rings of such truth when we remember or pang for a lover come and gone…

I am not in love with you, but in love with what used  to be.  We sometimes can’t make the distinction. 

posted by Troosha on October 8, 2008 at 6:14 AM | link to this | reply

This "messing with imagery" style is sure to take off big time Shelly!

whether messing or not the result seems to be excellence every time my friend; many blessings and thanks always

posted by mariaki on October 8, 2008 at 5:56 AM | link to this | reply

oh boy!

sounds like your reading my thoughs sam

posted by Katherine_Ann on October 7, 2008 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

whats up super how can one person have so much poetry?

posted by lestate7 on October 7, 2008 at 6:15 PM | link to this | reply

SOME MEMORIES DO RETURN SOMETIMES WHEN WE WISH THEY WOULD STAY AWAY, THANKS KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on October 7, 2008 at 5:50 PM | link to this | reply

You can mess with imagery any time if the results are going to be like this poem :-) .  Beautiful and full of waht I thought reading were hidden meanings... Great job!

posted by Sinome on October 7, 2008 at 5:46 PM | link to this | reply

strong sentiments, Sammy.  Hope your head is feeling better today.  Mal

posted by gapcohen on October 7, 2008 at 5:32 PM | link to this | reply

All the threads of experience tangle uniquea webs  The spin contiues after the event born within frustration Scream! Profound exmotions.

posted by merkie on October 7, 2008 at 4:59 PM | link to this | reply

My only contact to Nate...

is Dave, & that's it!!! All I can do is wait till the end of May 2009, & pray I get to see him!!

Max

posted by contagion_publishing on October 7, 2008 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply

"I sit on my laurels and proclaim I am free"...great line sam, loaded with

hidden meaning...how we all love to sit on our laurels and proclaim things that once might have been true, but no more...

posted by Rumor on October 7, 2008 at 4:46 PM | link to this | reply

Good Bye

Thank you so much Shelly!!! and if you read My jounal blog, you will see...

Love ANROHA25

posted by ANROHA25 on October 7, 2008 at 4:17 PM | link to this | reply