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sam, sunday is on your way!
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9STAR
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October 7, 2008
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I don't know if I like you sad, Sam
Wanna hear a good joke?
posted by
muley12
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October 7, 2008
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"Sadden heart" - unusual usage. I like it.
posted by
TAPS.
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October 7, 2008
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your work is really nice as it is always
its really a good work
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khyal
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October 7, 2008
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I enjoyed this greatly. Certainly the heart draws to it whatever it feels at the moment. It seems to look for others who are lonely when lonely and those who are happy when it is happy.
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Tea_Rose
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October 7, 2008
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Shelly
I get an an image of a Highland moor, whisps of fog, and ghostly forms among the bracken...
posted by
Nautikos
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October 7, 2008
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quality as always
posted by
9STAR
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October 7, 2008
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Oh, so well done
Great application of power in this one, you have given this one an almost stately inevitability, the theme parades in beautific majesty to it's conclusion - great work
posted by
lionreign
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October 7, 2008
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Strong and reaching work, Sam!
posted by
PoetRaye
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October 7, 2008
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Melancholy but beautifully worded my dear Shelly
powerful read indeed; many blessings and thanks my friend always
posted by
mariaki
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October 7, 2008
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here I am
posted by
lustorlove
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October 7, 2008
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A very sad yet powerful poem
May you be surrounded by the Light of Love to shine the way to truest path of love. many blessings skye
posted by
skye08
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October 7, 2008
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I'm always amazed . . .
posted by
yellowrose55
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October 6, 2008
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hey Sunday is on your way.,
posted by
9STAR
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October 6, 2008
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Awesome!
A rose
or two
and
Woof! from the wonder dog
and from me too!
posted by
Whacky
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October 6, 2008
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Beautiful words Sam...
"Obliquely, a sadden heart resolves itself to empower.
And, with baited breath seeks the dawn of its mystique. The sadden heart seeks a lonely fellow traveler. In loneliness, the light becomes dark’s embellisher. " such fantastic words. Sometimes though... one has to choose darkness over light because the light shine falls upon the wrong person, the wrong feeling... is just wrong. Oh don't miond me... I am crazy tomight ...is that half moon mocking me from the sky loll. Gorgeous poem Sam... Great job! Amazing!!!
posted by
Sinome
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October 6, 2008
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Always the light embelishes the dark. Lonely fellow travellers are we .
posted by
merkie
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October 6, 2008
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VERY NICE, DOES THE HEART DARE TO SPEAK?, THANKS KENT
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Riversidepoet
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October 6, 2008
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