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Whoa! You start off feeling better by the endof the poem shattered. Hold on

posted by Mystereo on December 16, 2008 at 3:04 PM | link to this | reply

Brilliant ending, simply brilliant! sam

posted by sam444 on October 3, 2008 at 4:57 PM | link to this | reply

Exquisite work!
 

posted by PoetRaye on October 3, 2008 at 7:15 AM | link to this | reply

TAKE A DEEP BREATH, COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS, I BET THEY ARE MORE THAN YOU THINK, LOOK UP AND SEARCH WITH ALL YOUR HEART, YOU WILL FIND IT, THANKS KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on October 3, 2008 at 6:52 AM | link to this | reply

Pelagus............
perhaps some time apart to sort out these conflicting emotions is necessary? excellent piece my friend; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on October 3, 2008 at 5:14 AM | link to this | reply

pel, this is so profound...beautiful work!

posted by _teddypoet_ on October 2, 2008 at 11:31 PM | link to this | reply

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