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Whoa! You start off feeling better by the endof the poem shattered. Hold on
posted by
Mystereo
on December 16, 2008 at 3:04 PM
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Brilliant ending, simply brilliant! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 3, 2008 at 4:57 PM
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Exquisite work!
posted by
Katray2
on October 3, 2008 at 7:15 AM
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TAKE A DEEP BREATH, COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS, I BET THEY ARE MORE THAN YOU THINK, LOOK UP AND SEARCH WITH ALL YOUR HEART, YOU WILL FIND IT, THANKS KENT
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 3, 2008 at 6:52 AM
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Pelagus............
perhaps some time apart to sort out these conflicting emotions is necessary? excellent piece my friend; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on October 3, 2008 at 5:14 AM
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pel, this is so profound...beautiful work!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on October 2, 2008 at 11:31 PM
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