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Painfully strong and heartfelt..
posted by
Katray2
on October 3, 2008 at 6:25 AM
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Re: Excellent piece albeit a sad thought my friend!
yes too sad, it was written 35 years ago, thank God it is not like that anymore, I have had peace and joy since Feb17th, 1991 when the Lord saved me, have a great day and thanks for reading and for your comments, thanks kent
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 3, 2008 at 5:57 AM
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Excellent piece albeit a sad thought my friend!
If I were you I'd keep trying until I get it right! Very well done; many blessings and thanks (and thank you also for visiting, much appreciated)
posted by
mariaki
on October 3, 2008 at 3:33 AM
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I like the use of repetition in your poem It keeps a solid rhythm going . There are lots of experiences not available for reruns!Thanks Kent
posted by
merkie
on October 2, 2008 at 8:28 PM
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