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posted by lustorlove on October 2, 2008 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful work, Sammy!

posted by _teddypoet_ on October 1, 2008 at 5:51 PM | link to this | reply

Great one Sammy
I've been missing them during my High Holidays.... Mal

posted by gapcohen on October 1, 2008 at 5:20 PM | link to this | reply

whats up super I love it! my book is out

go to http://www.amazon.com/ click in  American Nomad

or Osiris Halisi I love U

posted by lestate7 on October 1, 2008 at 2:50 PM | link to this | reply

That's nice Sam...
Fibonacci form... Exceptional... Requires a great deal of technique to write something as this. 

posted by laxman_v on October 1, 2008 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

short but so powerful and vivid.

posted by proc on October 1, 2008 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful form of poetry
& the meaning is so strong. Thank you for this beauty you're creating.

posted by pelagus on October 1, 2008 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

"Nothing can go wrong. Nothing can go wrong. Nothing can go wrong...."

posted by _Decshak on October 1, 2008 at 9:17 AM | link to this | reply

sam
 Your poem moves along the sentiment love. w/TLC, BCA, Bill’s Wave Blog on!

posted by BC-A on October 1, 2008 at 9:11 AM | link to this | reply

They should have had some early warning systems, sam, to say
that a person like you was coming to inhabit this earth :-)

posted by Straightforward on October 1, 2008 at 9:10 AM | link to this | reply

That's just amazing, Sam.
What a punch!

posted by strat on October 1, 2008 at 7:29 AM | link to this | reply

plaintive
and so powerful - Sam this is incredible - great poem!

posted by lionreign on October 1, 2008 at 6:35 AM | link to this | reply

Superb expression ........so well said !

posted by afzal50 on October 1, 2008 at 5:32 AM | link to this | reply

How flight happens..Fabulous work, Sam!
 

posted by PoetRaye on September 30, 2008 at 9:48 PM | link to this | reply

Good morning sam. What a lovely "flying" start to my day. I love the urgency behind the words. Very inspiring. Thanks for sticking with me and my category alphabet stunt.I must.....see it through to the bitter end.

posted by vogue on September 30, 2008 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

great words sam! I love the challenge too!

posted by Katherine_Ann on September 30, 2008 at 9:07 PM | link to this | reply

Fly on sam but don't forget to write to all your fans here ..Lol I really like this style of poem . They are fun to write . Maybe a challenge would start a trend! What do you think??

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