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SOLID! Loved this one!

posted by FaneXe on October 1, 2008 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

AWAKENING
I LOVE THE LINE WHERE YOU RISK IT ALL TO REACH THE SAFETY OF MORNING, THANKS KENT

posted by Riversidepoet on September 30, 2008 at 4:57 PM | link to this | reply

Sam, you know sometimes an awakening is what we really need in our lives so that we can really see who is actually guiding us each and every day  I believe sometimes God walks us thru darkness just to see the light.

posted by serpico on September 30, 2008 at 1:42 PM | link to this | reply

sam
 2 new seperate posts from book 8, for 9-30-08-Max

posted by contagion_publishing on September 30, 2008 at 12:50 PM | link to this | reply

Sam, after reading your poems, my soul always leaves a little more hopeful.  Its as if you would shine light upon its knowing.  This particular one was very poignant, so much so that after reading it several times I still keep finding hidden meanings in it.  I loved what you said about dreams..."Dreams can be sharp reminders that delicate reconstruction will return the splendor of the past to gleam once again. " See what I mean?  There is the slice of  hope I am taking with me today :-)  Excellent job my wise and prolific friend

posted by Sinome on September 30, 2008 at 9:07 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Awakening
Truly, Karma is a machine of time that never ceases to transport us, either to delights or nightmares. We do seem to eventually get whatever we give.

posted by Tea_Rose on September 30, 2008 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

Sam
Although sometimes arduous, the journey from darkness to light can be as spellbinding as the destination itself. 

posted by Troosha on September 30, 2008 at 7:37 AM | link to this | reply

So wise pursuit is awakening but darkness does never stop enveloping
our helpless being.

posted by afzal50 on September 30, 2008 at 7:35 AM | link to this | reply

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