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Whoa! You really touch my soul with this piece always strive.
posted by
Mystereo
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December 7, 2008
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Beautiful...
posted by
_Symphony_
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October 16, 2008
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It was gorgious
posted by
Smittenheimer
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October 10, 2008
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That last stanza says it all.
posted by
EX_TURPI
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October 10, 2008
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Your poem is a picture of beauty . . . the many seasons of loves feelings. Love it.
posted by
yellowrose55
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October 6, 2008
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Taps, this is a very cool poem. I like the complementing imagery and the congruity of the ending too! sam
posted by
sam444
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September 30, 2008
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Taps
I especially liked the idea that when two lovers come together and truly make a connection it
makes a mark that cannot be erased. That's a wonderful thought upon which to hang one's hat.
posted by
Troosha
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September 30, 2008
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You are right, Riversidepoet. That would be terrible. Thanks for reading.
posted by
TAPS.
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September 29, 2008
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We all strive for perfection. We all require love to share on the clean page of today.Together.
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merkie
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September 29, 2008
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LOVE MAKES ALL THINGS NEW, GOD FORBID A MARK THAT CAN'T BE ERASED, GREAT LINE, THANKS KENT
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Riversidepoet
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September 29, 2008
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