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Nice! Black birds golden seeds or somthing like that.

posted by Mystereo on December 15, 2008 at 7:15 PM | link to this | reply

Naut
They say blackbirds are magic.. may they bring you magic moments as you have us with your haiku.

posted by Blue_feathers on October 13, 2008 at 4:16 AM | link to this | reply

You paint this picture very well.

posted by EX_TURPI on October 10, 2008 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu is right.  It takes talent to give such a clear picture of autumn in three lines.  Bravo!

posted by Sinome on September 21, 2008 at 8:11 AM | link to this | reply

I love blackbirds - they call them grackles down here

posted by Smittenheimer on September 17, 2008 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply

Naut, well done! I'm more than ready for fall, and for more haiku or
other types of poetry from you....

posted by Rumor on September 16, 2008 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

I told you in person that you do this well and you do. This is quite
special. What three lines and I have a completed picture. Now that takes talent.

posted by Kabu on September 16, 2008 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos
Krisles, I'm really glad you enjoyed this!

posted by Nautikos on September 15, 2008 at 6:52 AM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, merkie!

posted by Nautikos on September 15, 2008 at 6:51 AM | link to this | reply

Nautikos
Today, thanks to Ike, the temp was in the 80's and I reveled in the coolness.....and the feeling that Fall would soon be here.....my favorite season.  How wonderful to log on and find this beautiful haiku and wrap myself in even more of the feeling.....someone was right, you really should write more of these.....well, I wish you would; I hardly ever get to write, but I do read and I need something to look forward to

posted by Krisles on September 14, 2008 at 6:25 PM | link to this | reply

marvellous images Thanks.

posted by merkie on September 12, 2008 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, TAPS! I am hugely delighted if my poetry elicits pleasant memories...

posted by Nautikos on September 12, 2008 at 5:53 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, Auslander! I'm never quite sure about this stuff, but I'm glad if people enjoy it...

posted by Nautikos on September 12, 2008 at 5:51 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks, Shelly! I am delighted to have you promote me...

posted by Nautikos on September 12, 2008 at 5:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Naut
Thanks, Troosh! I really appreciate the approval of a real poet...

posted by Nautikos on September 12, 2008 at 5:46 PM | link to this | reply

Nautikos, a sunny day not long ago, on a walk near a small lake, I startled a flock of
red-wing blackbirds in the midst of a bed of cattails at lake's edge.  They rose as one,
sounding a chorus of protest, but returning and settling in to their business after I passed.
Your haiku made me remember the incident.

posted by TAPS. on September 12, 2008 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply

Short and sweet! I like it!

posted by auslander on September 12, 2008 at 9:14 AM | link to this | reply

I love this Haiku! May I promote it at my blog my bro? I am taking info now! Thanks! Shelly

posted by sam444 on September 12, 2008 at 8:57 AM | link to this | reply

Naut
    You should do more of these - you're very good at it.

posted by Troosha on September 12, 2008 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply