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Sam this is beautifully written.  it contains within the feeling that you are writing  about...tranquility.  Like Tap said...once in a while its good to have conmotion to be able to grow and learn...and also to appreciate more what comes after all the dust settles down...the tranquility we all aspire to... Beautiful poem! 

(and thank you so much  for mentioning mine down there...that is very sweet of you, I am proud to be in the same page with Naut and you )

posted by Sinome on September 13, 2008 at 8:50 AM | link to this | reply

 

Your poem carries the torch coolly love~ Blog on! BCA, Bill’s Wave

 

posted by BC-A on September 12, 2008 at 10:51 PM | link to this | reply

posted by RomaKay on September 12, 2008 at 10:50 PM | link to this | reply

Sam444
Your blog is tranquility itself luv.

posted by WileyJohn on September 12, 2008 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply

Very interesting, Sam.  I'm thinking perhaps it is good that tranquility departs now and then for a time lest we become too caught up in its comforts and forget that growing and change usually come about when tranquility is absent.  But, as a lodestar, tranquility shines.

posted by TAPS. on September 12, 2008 at 1:02 PM | link to this | reply

Great poem.

 If only I could write like you!

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posted by Kolekshuns on September 12, 2008 at 10:31 AM | link to this | reply

A gem on the horizon.Kudos Sam

posted by merkie on September 12, 2008 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

Very cleverly done
I love the overall imagery, and the pace of this one.  Very good poem indeed!

posted by lionreign on September 12, 2008 at 7:28 AM | link to this | reply

just lovly dear sam!

posted by Katherine_Ann on September 12, 2008 at 6:07 AM | link to this | reply

is nice to find tranquility when you need it

posted by lustorlove on September 12, 2008 at 6:04 AM | link to this | reply

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