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Re: Luz_Briar

I was is a melancholy mood that day... I am glad it translated well

posted by lionreign on September 15, 2008 at 2:55 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam

thanks Sam... I am delighted that you enjoyed this so much.  I find that my poetry either plays with form or it plays with content... the next few are more focussed on content, but I will return to my experiments soon.  Especially after this sort of encouragement

posted by lionreign on September 15, 2008 at 2:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lion

It does push towards being a song, doesn't it?  Glad you liked this one, Troosha

posted by lionreign on September 15, 2008 at 2:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: A great love poem ...

Thank you genio - I am glad that you enjoyed it

posted by lionreign on September 15, 2008 at 2:35 AM | link to this | reply

Re: EX_TURPI

thank you - I am glad you enjoyed it

posted by lionreign on September 15, 2008 at 2:25 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Such a sweet poem! "She" is very lucky to have someone like you!

Thanks Tyleness, but I am pretty sure that I am the luckier one... after all I have somebody who inspires me to write.

posted by lionreign on September 15, 2008 at 2:16 AM | link to this | reply

how painful sad poem, lionreign. very lyrical

posted by Luz_Briar on September 14, 2008 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

I love this experimentation! It was so clever to build the last stanza within the poem. I am pleasantly astonished! BRAVO! sam

posted by sam444 on September 12, 2008 at 8:52 AM | link to this | reply

Lion

I made up my own tune to accompany your lyrics.  Great compassion….

posted by Troosha on September 12, 2008 at 8:44 AM | link to this | reply

A great love poem ...

... sensitive and sincere -  - genio

 

posted by ggXpress on September 12, 2008 at 8:19 AM | link to this | reply

Very great lyrics; great expression of the soul.

posted by EX_TURPI on September 12, 2008 at 7:36 AM | link to this | reply

Such a sweet poem! "She" is very lucky to have someone like you!

posted by tyleness on September 12, 2008 at 6:39 AM | link to this | reply