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mejustme
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September 17, 2008
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the day that never come....
posted by
9STAR
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September 5, 2008
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i think we all know the feeling.

posted by
Luz_Briar
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September 5, 2008
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Hi sweet lady Hope you're doing well. I missed you while I was away
posted by
Kabu
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September 5, 2008
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Re: Re: Hi, Purple ...genio/ggXpress.........
Hi - I've done that slip myself many times ... know how pronunciation and writing can confuse ...
A sensitive and tender poem with the undercurrent power of care ...
... but I've learned to let go ... stop fighting ... for then to let the battle end by itself: the more I fight the more fight I meet/get etc -
- genio
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ggXpress
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September 5, 2008
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Haunting and affecting work!
posted by
PoetRaye
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September 5, 2008
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Beautiful and touching
posted by
LillyHobbs
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September 5, 2008
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Beautiful Poem
Your poem is beautiful
posted by
starday
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September 5, 2008
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Re: Hi, Purple ...genio/ggXpress.........

thank you my dear....stand corrected...I apologize...
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__Purple_Mermaid11__
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September 5, 2008
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Hi, Purple ...
... I just wonder about a word in your poem ... the word 'loose' (written under the picture of you) ... shall it be the word : loose - or - lose ... 'cause it looks like the word should be lose, from what I understand your poem, but maybe you mean the word loose (with dobble o) ?
The words will give different meanings - and I'm not sure how to comment if the word is wrong -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
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September 5, 2008
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Beautiful
and profoundly moving. I will read this one again, it is just superb. Thank you for sharing it
posted by
lionreign
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September 5, 2008
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Innocent inspiration! With TLC, BCA , “top of the stairs”
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BC-A
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September 5, 2008
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