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posted by mejustme on September 17, 2008 at 7:39 PM | link to this | reply

the day that never come....

posted by 9STAR on September 5, 2008 at 9:15 PM | link to this | reply

i think we all know the feeling.

posted by Luz_Briar on September 5, 2008 at 6:06 PM | link to this | reply

Hi sweet lady Hope you're doing well. I missed you while I was away

posted by Kabu on September 5, 2008 at 3:18 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Hi, Purple ...genio/ggXpress.........

Hi - I've done that slip myself many times ... know how pronunciation and writing can confuse ...

A sensitive and tender poem with the undercurrent power of care ...

... but I've learned to let go ... stop fighting ... for then to let the battle end by itself: the more I fight the more fight I meet/get etc -  - genio

 

posted by ggXpress on September 5, 2008 at 12:49 PM | link to this | reply

Haunting and affecting work!

posted by PoetRaye on September 5, 2008 at 12:19 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful and touching

posted by LillyHobbs on September 5, 2008 at 12:17 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful Poem
Your poem is beautiful

posted by starday on September 5, 2008 at 11:36 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hi, Purple ...genio/ggXpress.........
thank you my dear....stand corrected...I apologize...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on September 5, 2008 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

Hi, Purple ...

... I just wonder about a word in your poem ... the word 'loose' (written under the picture of you) ... shall it be the word : loose - or - lose ... 'cause it looks like the word should be lose, from what I understand your poem, but maybe you mean the word loose (with dobble o) ?

The words will give different meanings - and I'm not sure how to comment if the word is wrong -  - genio

posted by ggXpress on September 5, 2008 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful
and profoundly moving.  I will read this one again, it is just superb.  Thank you for sharing it

posted by lionreign on September 5, 2008 at 7:23 AM | link to this | reply

 Innocent inspiration! With TLC, BCA , “top of the stairs”

posted by BC-A on September 5, 2008 at 7:07 AM | link to this | reply

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