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Incomplete is another step into the future of your self! Good write!
posted by
merkie
on September 4, 2008 at 5:35 PM
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Re: Feelings of Incompleteness
Thank you for stopping by thank you for the encouragement.
posted by
Tea_Rose
on September 4, 2008 at 1:25 PM
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Feelings of Incompleteness
Its my first time reading your writings....very good...Walls must stand alone for they alone can stand agains the wild, the tide and the wind... Keep writing
posted by
Color_Your_Life
on September 4, 2008 at 12:25 PM
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Hi Sinome. Thank you for taking the time to view my entries. Your response is very much appreciated. It means a great deal when someone else can relate to what a heart is feeling or at least has felt at some point in life.
posted by
Tea_Rose
on September 4, 2008 at 9:36 AM
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Nice... loved the imagery and the repetition of that line to empphasize the message of the poem. Good work!
posted by
Sinome
on September 3, 2008 at 9:29 PM
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