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Hat off! With the way you slapping those words on that paper. Great light!

posted by Mystereo on December 14, 2008 at 5:48 AM | link to this | reply

A great story! The world can be a cruel beast. But I say forge ahead and defeat her. Good luck!  sam

posted by sam444 on September 4, 2008 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

Well written poem.  Unfortunately my friend dissapointment is a big part of trying to publish our work.  All great writers and poets have been rejected at one time or another.  Keep trying to tell your story and don't five up.  The secret of success is to have faith in your own ability.  Good luck!

posted by Sinome on September 3, 2008 at 10:00 PM | link to this | reply