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Re: Marineair

Thanks buddy - I had a feeling you would like this one :D

 

posted by lionreign on September 9, 2008 at 11:21 AM | link to this | reply

This one is fantastic, Neal!

Bleed as I have bled
Before you claim to understand me

Great lines....

posted by Marineair on September 8, 2008 at 11:24 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

Thanks - this one was not the easiest to write, so I am especially glad to see such great comments on it

posted by lionreign on September 4, 2008 at 7:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sam

Thanks - this one is the result of a lot of hard work on behalf of my unpaid editor (who is also my muse) but i am pleased with the result.

 

Glad you liked it

posted by lionreign on September 4, 2008 at 7:10 AM | link to this | reply

Re: callista

and yet we should understand our own reasons and still we have trouble forgiving ourselves

posted by lionreign on September 4, 2008 at 7:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: purple Mermaid

thanks - this poem was actually written to me...

posted by lionreign on September 4, 2008 at 6:04 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent my friend... An amazing poem full of passion and feeling.  Loved it!

posted by Sinome on September 3, 2008 at 9:49 PM | link to this | reply

Poignant, look me in the eyes carries so much imagery within the scope of this awesome poem!  sam

posted by sam444 on September 3, 2008 at 3:38 PM | link to this | reply

Well written and a different view of forgiveness, if we could really understand and comprehend why someone has done something, there may be no forgiveness necessary.  Very good indeed.

posted by callista on September 3, 2008 at 3:30 PM | link to this | reply

hmnnn strong message my dear...

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on September 3, 2008 at 2:30 AM | link to this | reply